Avoiding plagiarism,
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ORIGINAL PARAGRAPH
“This study
examines whether workers of S. invicta are able to
assist their
mothers in colony usurpations. First we
tested
whether
[queens] of S. invicta are better able to usurp colonies to
which their
daughters have moved. Second, we tested
whether
the effect of
daughters on usurpation success is due to familiarity
with the queen
or to genetic relatedness. Aggressive
behavior
during these
usurpation attempts was observed to determine if the
presence of
familiar or related workers influenced the aggressive
response
toward either the resident queen or the queen attempting
usurpation.”
REWRITTEN VERSION 6
Balas and Adamsą carried out an investigation to determine whether S. invicta mothers are helped by their worker offspring during colony take-overs. These authors asked whether colony take-over by S. invicta queens is more effective when their daughters first invade the colonies. A second hypothesis concerned the extent to which daughters’ familiarity with the queen, or their genetic similarity to her, affects successful colony take-over. During these occupation attempts, aggressive behavior of usurping workers that were either familiar or genetically related was observed to see if these variables mediated aggressive behavior toward the invading or the resident queen.
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